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Walter loved things that fly. He thought of flying but his house was too small and he could not fly. What luck! Cousin Gorge had sent them a letter saying come to New york city for his family's vacation and also sent five airplane tickets for each of them. Walter could fly in an airplane! He was so happy, he could not wait. When the vacation finally arrivd, they went to the airport. And every time they were at the front of each line! When they got in the airplane line they were last. When they got on the plane, he watched the sky and at night he watched the sky for one hour and watched the T.V. When they got of the next day at night, They went to cousin Gorge's house and slept. The next day they went to the park. And they split up. Walter ment a bird. "Hello" said the bird How can you talk" asked Walter. "You know bird language." It chirped. "Can you teach me how to fly"? He asked. "sure" it said. He told Walter to flap his arms. But it did not work. Then the bird called his friends. They carried Walter to ashopin the sky. There they got Walter invisible wings. Then the bird taght Walter to fly. In time he was flapping his wings. The sky was very spacious. He though the sky was marvelous until A gust of breezy wind blew Walter and it was hard to fly. Eventually he stumbled at the end. He kept on stumbling and soaring. stumble. soar. stumble. soar. And it kept on going. until at last he was good. Meanwhile He heard every one bellow his name. He thought straight was better than crooked.
I got the idea from ~akita42 to upload a story I wrote when I was younger... I think I was like 7? I edited it back then so some of the mistakes were rubbed out and replaced, but I'll write in the mistakes that weren't erased. Not sure about the ending here..

Also unsure of what category to put this in.
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:iconejwhiskers:
EJwhiskers Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww you're so cute I can't
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:iconmimilabeau:
mimilabeau Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
why??? howw??
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:iconejwhiskers:
EJwhiskers Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You just are!
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:iconmimilabeau:
mimilabeau Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how is this cute it is weird
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:iconakita42:
akita42 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
this is cute!
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:iconmimilabeau:
mimilabeau Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no it's not, wtf is up with the ending anyway?
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:iconakita42:
akita42 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
ask 7 year old you. it made sense then!
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:iconmimilabeau:
mimilabeau Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
probably not...
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BlizzardFoxx Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable story, Misa!
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:iconmimilabeau:
mimilabeau Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why did I pick the name Walter?
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